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	<title>Comments for The Wonderful World of Wintermutt</title>
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		<title>Comment on Smoke and Mirrors by wintermutt</title>
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		<dc:creator>wintermutt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Oct 2007 17:07:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Sara. I was definitely trying to be tricksy with this one. Note the clues that the reader isn&#039;t let in on until the &#039;big reveal&#039;, because they&#039;re either given a brief description or not mentioned at all. Bad writer. Bad. :)

The ending (as in the &#039;big reveal of the detectives identity) wasn&#039;t something I&#039;d planned, it just kind of took a life of it&#039;s own. Initially I hadn&#039;t really planned on the detective being that important to a very short story (beyond the obvious act of solving the &#039;crime&#039;). But as the story got longer, the detective became more important to the process. As I was wrapping up the story threads - it kinda hit me: I&#039;d been assuming the detective was male (and had written the detectives growing personality as such). But that didn&#039;t have to be, did it? The mystery had taken on a somewhat Agatha Christie tone (hence the reference to Christie towards the end) and Christie&#039;s work is full of female detectives. So why not? And then that led into the whole Rabowirtz thing... And one more little trick on the audience. I just hope I haven&#039;t offended an entire gender with this piece...

Incredibly fun to write (and hopefully somewhat fun to read) but I&#039;m not sure how realistic the whole thing is. Next time I&#039;ll try to be a little less tricksy, I think.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Sara. I was definitely trying to be tricksy with this one. Note the clues that the reader isn&#8217;t let in on until the &#8216;big reveal&#8217;, because they&#8217;re either given a brief description or not mentioned at all. Bad writer. Bad. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>The ending (as in the &#8216;big reveal of the detectives identity) wasn&#8217;t something I&#8217;d planned, it just kind of took a life of it&#8217;s own. Initially I hadn&#8217;t really planned on the detective being that important to a very short story (beyond the obvious act of solving the &#8216;crime&#8217;). But as the story got longer, the detective became more important to the process. As I was wrapping up the story threads &#8211; it kinda hit me: I&#8217;d been assuming the detective was male (and had written the detectives growing personality as such). But that didn&#8217;t have to be, did it? The mystery had taken on a somewhat Agatha Christie tone (hence the reference to Christie towards the end) and Christie&#8217;s work is full of female detectives. So why not? And then that led into the whole Rabowirtz thing&#8230; And one more little trick on the audience. I just hope I haven&#8217;t offended an entire gender with this piece&#8230;</p>
<p>Incredibly fun to write (and hopefully somewhat fun to read) but I&#8217;m not sure how realistic the whole thing is. Next time I&#8217;ll try to be a little less tricksy, I think.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Smoke and Mirrors by Sara</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Oct 2007 18:06:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, wow. This was an entirely entertaining read. I especially like how you ended it. :o) 

I look forward to reading many more prompt responses from you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, wow. This was an entirely entertaining read. I especially like how you ended it. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_surprised.gif' alt=':o' class='wp-smiley' /> ) </p>
<p>I look forward to reading many more prompt responses from you!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Smoke and Mirrors by October Participants &#124; Cafe Writing</title>
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		<dc:creator>October Participants &#124; Cafe Writing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Oct 2007 02:48:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Smoke and Mirrors, by Wintermutt [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Smoke and Mirrors by MissMeliss</title>
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		<dc:creator>MissMeliss</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Oct 2007 00:07:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Groovous.</description>
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